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 ## Introduction  
 
-Tian Lulu was a popular *League of Legends* streamer active on platforms like Bilibili and Huya, with a large number of followers.
+Tian Lulu (meaning sweet deer) was a popular *League of Legends* streamer active on platforms like Bilibili and Huya, with a large number of followers.
 
-She had a special fondness for the *League of Legends* character Seraphine, the Starry-Eyed Songstress, frequently using her in games.
-Lulu’s profile picture was Seraphine as well.  
+In *League of Legends*, she had a special fondness for the character Seraphine, the Starry-Eyed Songstress;
+she frequently chose this character as her game avatar.
+Lulu’s profile picture was Seraphine as well.
 
 As a highly skilled player,
-Lulu exceled not only with Seraphine but also demonstrated proficiency with other champions,offering her unique insights.
-She was known for her good personality,
-never engaging in personal attacks during matches.  
+Lulu excelled not only with Seraphine but also demonstrated proficiency with other champions,
+offering her unique insights.
+She was known for her good personality, like never engaging in personal attacks during matches.
 
-Lulu had brought many joyful moments to her audience,
+Lulu brought many joyful moments to her audience,
 occasionally conducting educational streams.
-Many viewers had learnt from her and developed their own skills,
-becoming proficient players in their own right.  
+Many viewers learnt from her and developed skills that suit themselves,
+becoming proficient players in their own right.
 
 Despite playfully referring to herself as a "feminine boy",
 Lulu struggled with gender dysphoria.
 She dreamed of growing her hair long,
-wearing beautiful clothes, 
-and living authentically without judgment or discrimination.  
+dressing up in pretty clothes, 
+and living authentically without fear of judgment or discrimination.
 
-However, these internal struggles had left her increasingly depressed, insecure, and emotionally sensitive.
+However, these internal struggles left her increasingly depressed, insecure, and emotionally sensitive.
 She craved love but was also terrified of receiving it.  
 
 In truth, Lulu had contemplated leaving this world for a long time.
-Beneath her vibrant public persona lied a deep sense of helplessness and despair about life.  
+Beneath her vibrant public persona lay a deep helplessness and despair.
 
-Ultimately, she found herself falling into an irreversible abyss at last...  
+Ultimately, she found herself falling into an irreversible abyss...
 
-"If I could be a Jewel in my next life, that would be nice..."  
+"If I could be a Jewel person[^1] in my next life, that would be nice..."  
 
 [^1]: *Land of the Lustrous* features characters made of various minerals and gemstones. Though they appear feminine, they use male pronouns in daily communication and are considered genderless beings.