From 52c02f4d4d259f24f4f153d23b65b1fb81c2d77b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Wed, 19 Apr 2023 18:41:46 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] [F] improve grammar for keyword233's page. (#115) --- people/keyword233/page.en.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/keyword233/page.en.md b/people/keyword233/page.en.md index fc74f3d1..edd692dc 100644 --- a/people/keyword233/page.en.md +++ b/people/keyword233/page.en.md @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ ---- name: keyword233 info: alias: keyword233 @@ -7,8 +6,9 @@ info: ## Description -Her name is [keyword233](https://twitter.com/keyword233). She is a transgender female from China. She runned her own channel on Telegram sharing her bits of life and feelings from the heart. +[keyword233](https://twitter.com/keyword233) was a transgender woman from China. During the past few years, she shared laughters and tears with friends on her Telegram channel where she posted bits of her daily life. -She was a strong and resilient person who bravely faced societal prejudice and discrimination, firmly defended her gender identity. She had a strong interest in computers and cats, which I thought was great. With her intelligence and passion, she added a bright color to this world. +She was a strong and resilient person who faced societal prejudice and discrimination bravely and defended her gender identity firmly. +Her interest was in computers and cats. Her passion and intelligence brought beauty to the world. -Sadly, she passed away in the hospital on April 19, 2023. We express our deepest condolences and will always remember her. +Sadly, she passed away in the hospital on April 19, 2023. We express our deepest condolences. She will always be in our heart.