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## Description
Proselyte was our ally. They often interacted with us friendly in spite of their introverted personality.
Proselyte was our ally. They often interacted with us friendly despite their introverted personality.
They were fond of cute cats. Whether it was their own cat, or cats in a pet shop, or cats they met on the street.
They liked some niche pixel art RPG games, such as *Ib* and *Yume 2kki*, and always recorded their RPG game experiences on Bilibili.
Proseleyte also contributed to their favourite games.
According to their friends, they made soundtracks for some games, and took up a position in *Yume Nikki Online Project* before.
According to their friends, they made soundtracks for some games and took up a position in *Yume Nikki Online Project* before.
## Departure
Owing to long-term domestic violence, having been hurt by friend in senior high school, and getting mentally abused by their professor in university, Proselyte was troubled by anxiety and depression all along.
They gradually felt that they were losing the sense of existance.
Owing to long-term domestic violence, having been hurt by friends in senior high school, and getting mentally abused by their professor in university, Proselyte was troubled by anxiety and depression all along.
They gradually felt that they were losing their sense of existence.
However, they still tried to support theirselves by consuming beautiful things, incuding their favourite games, cute animals, and colourful illustrations.
However, they still tried to support themselves by consuming beautiful things, including their favourite games, cute animals, and colourful illustrations.
When our friends fell in anxiety, they would generously give their warm hug.
Until early November, they still held on to the hope of curing depression before their birthday.
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> "I felt malice in the world again. I even didn't understand why... Perhaps I was born to be hated."
This thing triggered their PTSD about offence and cold violence from others previously.
After that, their mental health gradully deteriorated.
In an evening, they went out of their home silently and assimilated into the night.
After that, their mental health gradually deteriorated.
In the evening, they went out of their home silently and assimilated into the night.
## After their leaving
Owing to their introverted personality, they still had some unsent words to their best friends.
After Proselyte's departure, a friend of them (didn't want to disclose indentity) took over their account, and sent those words in the name of them.
After Proselyte's departure, a friend of them (who didn't want to disclose their identity) took over their account and sent those words in their name.
The friend also replied to those caring messages in Discord, Twitter/X, QQ platform and so on.
The sister of Proselyte contacted with us as well. Although she couldn't see the last time of them. But she expressed her condolence in her email to us:
> " They are other half scattered soul of mine. Wish they be well in paradise. I hope there's not austism in the heaven. "
> " They are the other half scattered soul of mine. Wish they be well in paradise. I hope there's no autism in heaven. "
>
> Proselyte's sister, written on 2023-12-05
"Death is not the end of life, but oblivion is."
This is what Proselyte wrote for [Qi](https://one-among.us/profile/qiqi233345) to remember her.
This is also a quote sentence showed on the main page of "One Among Us". We will never forget you, who are gentle and tough. Rest well, Proselyte.
Proselyte wrote this for [Qi](https://one-among.us/profile/qiqi233345) to remember her.
This is also a quote sentence shown on the main page of "One Among Us". We will never forget you, who are gentle and tough. Rest well, Proselyte.

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## Description
Yantian was our friend, they contributed to suicide intervention and other supports in transgender community, and accompanied others warmly and friendly.
Yantian was our friend, they contributed to suicide intervention and other supports in transgender community and accompanied others warmly and friendly.
Everyone liked them very much, and they got a intimate name “Sister Yantian”.
Everyone liked them very much, and they got an intimate name “Sister Yantian”.
They were also a [railfan](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Railfan), and their nickname originated from Shenzhen Metro Line 8 (also known as the Yantian Line).
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## Their Departure and Our Memorial
At the end of 2023, Yantian was dealing with some trouble things happend in Guangdong. During this period, they overdrawn their energy, but they still overclocked (worked tirelessly) for everyone.
At the end of 2023, Yantian was dealing with some troublesome things happening in Guangdong. During this period, they overdrawn their energy, but they still overclocked (worked tirelessly) for everyone.
Owing to the need of maintaining better sleep, Yantian had been using sedatives for a long time, and their medication gradually exceeded the safe dose.
Owing to the need to maintain better sleep, Yantian had been using sedatives for a long time, and their medication gradually exceeded the safe dose.
Plus, they had overdrawn their energy a lot.
These factors put their physical and mental health in danger.
Yantian unfortunately left us due to cardiac arrest on 12th January 2024.
One Among Us members were extremely shock and sad, too.
But we cannot push formal entry for them until people recovered from sadness.
One Among Us members were extremely shocked and sad, too.
But we cannot push formal entry for them until people recover from sadness.
Based on this, We temporarily set up a small room for them, to make their memorial warmer in this severe winter.
If you wish, you can share your memory with Yantian by comment.
> Tips: Your comments and memories in this memorial page will be considerated to be **referenced** by default. One Among Us editors will complete their formal entry with your helps. We will retain all approved comments in their formal entry.
> Tips: Your comments and memories on this memorial page will be considered to be **referenced** by default. One Among Us editors will complete their formal entry with your help. We will retain all approved comments in their formal entry.
>
> If you don't hope your comment to be referenced, please mark out.
> If you don't hope your comment to be referenced, please mark it out.
>
> You can send email to [info@one-among.us](mailto:info@one-among.us) to contribute photos or other rich text, or submit issue to our [Github repository](https://github.com/one-among-us/data).
> You can send an email to [info@one-among.us](mailto:info@one-among.us) to contribute photos or other rich text or submit an issue to our [Github repository](https://github.com/one-among-us/data).
Yantian, have a good rest...have a good sleep. Thank you for your efforts all this time.
Yantian, have a good rest...have a good sleep. Thank you for your efforts all this time.