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   location: Guangdong, Foshan
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-> "Does my name mean 澪, you ask? Not really. Actually, "Mio" is also something I came up with on a whim. I'm not good at Japanese, sorry."
+> “Does my name mean 澪, you ask? Not really. Actually, ‘Mio’ is also something I came up with on a whim. I'm not good at Japanese, sorry.”
 
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 Mio is from Guangdong, Foshan.
-Her father is a high school teacher; her mother takes care of everything at home.
+Her father is a high school teacher; her mother handles everything at home.
 She has an older sister who is also trans.
-She was admitted to one of the top universities in China because of her brilliance and dexterousness.
+She was accepted to one of the top universities in China because of her brilliance and dexterousness.
 
 > My IQ is 130, my IQ is 130!
 > ——Mio when she was small (in primary school)
 
-In life, she liked to play *Minecraft* and *Karbel Space Program*.
+In life, she liked to play *Minecraft* and *Kerbal Space Program*.
 After all these years, she became a gentle big sister to many people.
 
-She suffered major depression disorder throughout the last year of her life.
+She suffered from major depression throughout the last year of her life.
 Although she was pushed to suicide several times, she still tried to live as happily as she could.
 She made many friends and built up many relationships in that year alone:
 
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 ## From best "boy" friends to best girl friends with her friend whom she met in primary school
 
-In 2022 April, [Bei Yan Yun Yi](https://github.com/BeiyanYunyi) saw a social media post from Mio.
+In April 2022, [Bei Yan Yun Yi](https://github.com/BeiyanYunyi) saw a social media post from Mio.
 It was also at that time that Bei Yan Yun Yi figured out her gender identity.
-Bei Yan Yun Yi remembered that Mio had done research on SRS during primary school.
+Bei Yan Yun Yi remembered that Mio had researched SRS during primary school.
 Therefore, when she reconnected with Mio, she came out to her.
 Just like that, best "boy" friends became best girl friends.
 
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 > 
 > Mio: Do you have a moment right now?
 >
-> Me (Translator's note: The sender is Bei Yan Yun Yi, her friend whom she met in primary school): Sure.
+> Me (Translator’s note: The sender is Bei Yan Yun Yi, her friend whom she met in primary school): Sure.
 > 
 > Me: So I was thinking, are you trans?
 >
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 >
 > Mio: Is it because you saw my Tieba (Translator's note: a popular social media platform) post?
 >
-> Me: No, I haven't checked Tieba in a while. I did see your WeChat (Translator's note: another popular social media platform) post, though.
+> Me: No, I haven’t checked Tieba in a while. I did see your WeChat (Translator's note: another popular social media platform) post, though.
 > 
 > Me: Have you considered what you're experiencing to be Gender Dysphoria?
 > 
-> Mio: Probably. . .
+> Mio: Probably…
 > 
 > Me: I think we need to meet. How about May 1st? (Translator's note: a holiday)
 > 
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 > 
 > > (Translation of the post):
 > >
-> > To be able to maintain a state between male and female is a miracle――height, body shape, behavior, skin, and voice.
+> > Being able to maintain a state between male and female is a miracle――height, body shape, behaviour, skin, and voice.
 > > A state like this allows me to switch gender presentations relatively easily without fear of being clocked.
 > > Being in a state like this delayed the worsening of my Gender Dysphoria.
 > >
 > > But I can't delay it forever.
-> > I don't identify with most of what is commonly considered "male qualities". (Means I don't want to be a man.) I don't want to be the object of "male gaze", too. (That is disgusting.)
+> > I don't identify with most of what’s commonly considered “musculine qualities”. (Means I don’t want to be a man.) I don’t want to be the object of “male gaze”, too. (That is disgusting.)
 > > I only have one choice left:
-> > I don't want to be recognized as male, nor be seen as the object of "male gaze".
+> > I don’t want to be recognized as a man, nor be seen as the object of “male gaze”.
-> > In other words, an independent, intelligent, gentle but determined woman (or someone who is not constrained by gender entirely).
+> > In other words, I want to be seen as an independent, intelligent, gentle but determined woman (or someone who’s not constrained by gender entirely).
 > > However, it's really hard to do something like this.
 > > I will have to endure the pain of Gender Dysphoria by not presenting as myself in the foreseeable future.
 > >
-> > This is my coming out post. Rest assured. I will still be the "me" whom you are already familiar with.
+> > This is my coming out post. Rest assured. I will still be the "me" who you are already familiar with.
-> > And one more note: I still won't be interested in men.
+> > And one more note: I still won’t be interested in men.
 >
 > Me: This Wechat post is my coming out post.
 > Me: We are sisters, now.
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-Her friend didn't expect the goodbye at the airport became the last time she could ever see her:
+Her friend didn’t expect the goodbye at the airport to become the last time she could ever see her:
 
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 In China mainland, graduation certificates are void after a gender marker change;
 SRS is required to change the gender marker.
-Therefore, only people who are "lucky" enough to be able to afford and go through SRS before graduation can gain their graduation certificates.
+Therefore, only people who are “lucky” enough to afford and go through SRS before graduation can gain their graduation certificates.
 
-Mio was trying to make that money in the hope that she can gain enough money for SRS before graduation.
+Mio was trying to make that money in the hope that she could gain enough money for SRS before graduation.
-Unfortunately, her depression left her unable to learn programming so she couldn't make money that way.
+Unfortunately, her depression left her unable to learn programming so she couldn’t make money that way.
 Therefore, she resorted to being a driver instead.
 However, she was demanded over a thousand (more than she had earned) and got mocked for being trans after an accident in which no one was hurt.
 
 And therefore:
 
 Despite her best efforts, she was overpowered by another episode of depression and suicidal thoughts on 2023 February 24th, two days after the accident.
-This time, she didn't tell anyone about her plan and only set up a scheduled Tweet at noon the next day.
+This time, she didn’t tell anyone about her plan and only set up a scheduled Tweet at noon the next day.
 When her mother found her, it was already too late.
 
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 > 
 > Rest in peace, Mio.
 > 
-> > Mio 2023 Feb 25th (Translator's note: The time discrepancy is because she scheduled this Tweet.):
+> > Mio 2023 Feb 25th (Translator’s note: The time discrepancy is because she scheduled this Tweet.):
 > >
 > > Goodbye. . .everyone.
 > >
-> > This sleep will be a long one. . .
+> > This sleep will be a long one…
 >
 > ---
 > 
 > @biliacat 2023 Feb 25th:
 > 
-> Mio, you already promised me you aren't going to do something like this. . .
+> Mio, you already promised me you aren't going to do something like this…
 > 
 > Your mother told me:
 > "When I came into her room this morning, I saw--
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 > 
 > @biliacat 2023 Feb 26th
 > 
-> Mio was a student in one of the best universities in China.
+> Mio was a student at one of the best universities in China.
 > She was brilliant and dexterous.
 > 
 > Her death seems to be an individual incident, but it's more complicated than that.
 > 
 > She suffered from depression and was hospitalized once.
-> She was managing is with medications, but she was unable to fully control it.
+> She was managing it with medications, but she was unable to fully control it.
-> She sometimes harms herself and talk about her suicidal thoughts.
+> She sometimes harms herself and talks about her suicidal thoughts.
 > 
 > The direct reason behind her suicide is what happened two days ago.
 > Her family members didn't help her in time.
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 > 
 > @biliacat 2023 Feb 26th
 > 
-> Therefore, the real reasons behind her suicide are problems in society and in her own family:
+> Therefore, the real reasons behind her suicide are problems in society and her own family:
 > 
-> Most people don't understand depression and Gender Dysphoria.
+> Most people don’t understand depression and Gender Dysphoria.
 > 
-> Most people disapprove of trans people and gender-confirming treatments.
+> Most people disapprove of trans people and gender-affirming treatments.
 > 
 > A few people persuade others into suicide for fun.
 > 
-> These factors caused tragedies after tragedies.
+> These factors caused tragedy after tragedy.
 > Therefore, I must say that it was already mostly determined at the start.
 > 
 > Let's wish her rest in peace.
 > 
 > (2/2)
-> 
 
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 > . . .
 >
-> Me (Translator's note: The sender is Bei Yan Yun Yi, her friend whom she met in primary school.): What is happening?
+> Me (Translator’s note: The sender is Bei Yan Yun Yi, her friend whom she met in primary school.): What is happening?
 >
 > Mio: Just another episode of depression.
 > 
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 >
 > Me: (fainting face emoji)
 >
-> Mio: I'm sorry.
+> Mio: I’m sorry.
 > 
 > Mio: I had already planned out everything:
 > 
-> Mio: Quit my QQ groups; delete my contacts; schedule a Tweet. . .
+> Mio: Quit my QQ groups; delete my contacts; schedule a Tweet…
 
 May you rest in peace, Mio.