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 ## Profile
 
-Gaoyang was a pretty, tender and kind girl. Lived in a single-parent family, she had been enduring poverty since she was a child, but she always acted as a strong girl.
+Gaoyang was a pretty, tender and kind girl. She always acted strong despite being raised in poverty by a single-parent.
 
 Contributor: Han Lianyi