From 723d5bcb9c9692d7ebbdc5abc3e092f5d03d36bb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Wed, 6 Nov 2024 23:24:36 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] grammarly free --- people/AkiraComplex/page.en.md | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/AkiraComplex/page.en.md b/people/AkiraComplex/page.en.md index 1db6547f..b8ce21fa 100644 --- a/people/AkiraComplex/page.en.md +++ b/people/AkiraComplex/page.en.md @@ -16,17 +16,17 @@ info: > **MY GUIDING STAR**. -Akira Complex was a wonderful, beautiful, caring person. +Akira Complex was a wonderful, beautiful, and caring person. -They managed to work through their pain for years by bringing joy to many with their exceptional talent and sensational music. +They pushed through their pain for years, bringing joy to many with their exceptional talent and moving music. -But their pain proved to be too much for them... +But their pain might have been too heavy... -That soul full of love and warmth left us at last, like a meteor. +At last, that soul full of love and warmth left us, like a shooting star. Bright and fragile, -shocking but fleeting... +moving but fleeting... -Akira, We will always remember you and your works. +Akira, We will always remember you and your creations. > My Guiding star, forever...