From 7c5f0c355523aaca286e467b867b73d7a98bb748 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Wed, 14 Feb 2024 20:28:58 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] [F] SS3B_0016@en --- people/SS3B_0016/page.en.md | 15 ++++++++------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/SS3B_0016/page.en.md b/people/SS3B_0016/page.en.md index d3787da6..8f5f9f17 100644 --- a/people/SS3B_0016/page.en.md +++ b/people/SS3B_0016/page.en.md @@ -7,9 +7,9 @@ info: ## Description -Yantian was our friend, they contributed to suicide intervention and other supports in transgender community and accompanied others warmly and friendly. +Yantian was our friend, they did suicide intervention and other social work in transgender community and was a great company to many. -Everyone liked them very much, and they got an intimate name “Sister Yantian”. +Everyone liked them very much, so they got an intimate name “Sister Yantian”. They were also a [railfan](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Railfan), and their nickname originated from Shenzhen Metro Line 8 (also known as the Yantian Line). @@ -17,7 +17,8 @@ By coincidence, before they celebrated their 23rd birthday, Line 8 Phase 2 opene ## Their Departure and Our Memorial -At the end of 2023, Yantian was dealing with some troublesome things happening in Guangdong. During this period, they overdrawn their energy, but they still overclocked (worked tirelessly) for everyone. +At the end of 2023, Yantian was dealing with some troublesome things in Guangdong. +During this period, they overdrawn their energy, but they still worked tirelessly for everyone. Owing to the need to maintain better sleep, Yantian had been using sedatives for a long time, and their medication gradually exceeded the safe dose. Plus, they had overdrawn their energy a lot. @@ -25,11 +26,11 @@ These factors put their physical and mental health in danger. Yantian unfortunately left us due to cardiac arrest on 12th January 2024. One Among Us members were extremely shocked and sad, too. -But we cannot push formal entry for them until people recover from sadness. +This is a temporary entry for now. We'll finish this when people recover from sadness. -Based on this, We temporarily set up a small room for them, to make their memorial warmer in this severe winter. +Based on this, We temporarily set up a small space online for them, to make their memorial warmer in this severe winter. -If you wish, you can share your memory with Yantian by comment. +If you wish, you can share your memory of Yantian by comment. > Tips: Your comments and memories on this memorial page will be considered to be **referenced** by default. One Among Us editors will complete their formal entry with your help. We will retain all approved comments in their formal entry. > @@ -37,4 +38,4 @@ If you wish, you can share your memory with Yantian by comment. > > You can send an email to [info@one-among.us](mailto:info@one-among.us) to contribute photos or other rich text or submit an issue to our [Github repository](https://github.com/one-among-us/data). -Yantian, have a good rest...have a good sleep. Thank you for your efforts all this time. +Yantian, have a good rest and have a good sleep. Thank you for your efforts all this time.