diff --git a/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md b/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md
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--- a/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md
+++ b/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md
@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@ info:
## Description
-> A random rhythm game player! ! !
+> Random rhythm game player here! ! !
-Yuexi is a lively and adorable girl who loves to play various games, mainly music games.
-There are somebody who she love and also loves her.
+Yuexi was a lively and adorable girl who liked to play games, primarily music games.
+She was in mutual love with someone.
-Sometimes, she likes to go to the arcade in Xinjiekou[^1] to play maimaiDX a few times.
+Sometimes, she played maimaiDX for a few turns at the arcade in Xinjiekou[^1].
-> The End ~ 9000 points achieved ~ I feel great today, 9 SSS+, 3 SSS and some small points, totally 99 points!
+> I feel great today! ~ 9000 points achieved, 9 SSS+, 3 SSS and some small points, exactly 99 points!
-Other times, she turns on her tablet to obtain ptt[^2] for a while.
+Sometimes, she played Arcaea on her tablet to hone her skills (increase ptt[^2]).
-This silly girl loves to eat barbecue, sometimes finishing a big plate all by herself.
+She loved to eat barbecue; sometimes, she'd finish a big plate all by herself. How shortsighted.
-Sometimes she even turns into a child.
+Sometimes, she mentally turns into a child.
> I caught a doll today, yay!
-Loves you.
+Love you.
## Departure
-After she took a leave of absence from [Nanjing Agricultural University](https://rle.wiki/campus/NJAU.html) and returning home, her already unsustainable mental state deteriorated further..
+After she took a leave of absence from [Nanjing Agricultural University](https://rle.wiki/campus/NJAU.html) and returned home, her already fragile mental state deteriorated further.
-> I can't muster the energy for the hobbies I once loved. What do I have left? Hmm... it seems I still have an interest in delicious food and beautiful clothes. Maybe... I can still save myself (laughs)
+> I can’t muster the energy for the hobbies I once loved. What do I have left? Hmm... I might still have an interest in food and clothing. Maybe, just maybe, I can still save myself (laughs)
-In the end, she chose to leave during the supposed joyous summer vacation
+In the end, she chose to leave during the supposed joyous summer vacation.
> Farewell, YueXi...
[^1]: Xinjiekou, Nanjing. Located in the city center, it is the center of business and transportation. See also: [Xinjiekou, Nanjing: Wikipedia](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xinjiekou,_Nanjing)
-[^2]: Potential. A numerical value used to measure player skill in the rhythm game Arcaea.
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+[^2]: Potential. A numerical value used to measure player skill in the rhythm game Arcaea.
diff --git a/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md b/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md
index 3d0acd9e..a09bd413 100644
--- a/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md
+++ b/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md
@@ -11,30 +11,32 @@ info:
## Description
-Xueli was a trans girl who is gentle, lovely, kind-hearted but somewhat solitary.
+Xueli was a gentle, lovely, kind-hearted, but somewhat solitary trans girl.
-She was skilled in drawing, and she prepared a painting as a present for her friend.
-However, her friend only received the painting after her death.
+She was skilled in drawing.
+She once made a drawing as a present for her friend.
+However, only after her death did her friend receive the drawing.
-In the two Zhihu questions [How's meeting Xuewulihuameng irl?](https://www.zhihu.com/question/269853559) and [How to appraise the death-seeking behavior of Xuewulihuameng?](https://www.zhihu.com/question/268738337), many of her friends expressed their grief and said that she was really gentle. Even just before her departure, she still consoled and encouraged one of her friends.
+In the Zhihu questions [How’s meeting Xuewulihuameng in real life?](https://www.zhihu.com/question/269853559) and [What do you think of the death-seeking tendencies of Xuewulihuameng?](https://www.zhihu.com/question/268738337), many of her friends expressed their grief and said that she was really kind.
+Just before her departure, she still consoled and encouraged one of her friends.
## Her Departure
-As mentioned at the beginning, "May kind souls be treated gently by the world."
+Xueli wrote at the beginning, “May kind souls be treated kindly by the world.”
But, Xueli herself was a kind, gentle girl...
-On the afternoon and evening of April 1st, 2018, she was still living happily in this world.
+From the afternoon to the evening of April 1st, 2018, she was still living happily in this world.
-However, later on,
-after failing to reveal her gender identity to her parents and browsing numerous negative messages on the internet,
-she started to consider the idea of taking her own life.
+However, that same night, she revealed her gender identity to her parents. Her parents reacted horribly.
+Then, after browsing numerous negative messages on the internet,
+she started to consider taking her own life.
-On that quiet night, she left home for the Huanghuayuan Jialingjiang Bridge...
+On that quiet night, without letting anyone know, she went to the Huanghuayuan Jialingjiang Bridge...
-This is the last photo she left behind:
+Following is the last photo she left behind:
@@ -42,23 +44,19 @@ Looking into the distance from the bridge,
the blurred lights seemed to be moistened by tears...
After leaving a scheduled suicide note, Xueli chose to leave this world.
-She wore a beautiful dress,
-and there was still a sweet smile on her face when she was found.
+When she was found, she wore a beautiful dress, smiling.
-Her friend said that she was afraid of pain undoubtly.
She always treated people around her gently,
-but what she'd done was so cruel to herself...
+but what she’d done was so cruel to herself...according to her friends, she was terrified of pain after all.
-## After Her Deperture
+## After Her Departure
-Xueli's friend [Futajuhuacha](https://one-among.us/profile/Futajuhuacha) was also a very gentle girl.
+Xueli’s friend [Futajuhuacha](https://one-among.us/profile/Futajuhuacha) was also a very gentle girl.
-After her left, Huacha deeply missed her and eventually chose to follow her to death in the same place.
+After her departure, Huacha deeply missed her and eventually ended her life on the same bridge.
-Pray for these two girls in heaven.
+“As if the vernal breeze had come back overnight, Adorning thousands of pear trees with blossoms white.”
-"As if the vernal breeze had come back overnight, Adorning thousands of pear trees with blossoms white."
-
-We are waiting for the day gentle breeze comes again,
+We are waiting for the day the gentle breeze comes again,
and pear blossoms come out once more,
also waiting for your return, reunion...