From 1e6634817d35b97bb003771c7546acd8c04b9686 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Wed, 25 Dec 2024 15:11:49 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 1/4] grammarly --- people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md | 42 +++++++++++++++----------------- 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md b/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md index 3d0acd9e..9158215a 100644 --- a/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md +++ b/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md @@ -11,30 +11,32 @@ info: ## Description -Xueli was a trans girl who is gentle, lovely, kind-hearted but somewhat solitary. +Xueli was a gentle, lovely, kind-hearted, but somewhat solitary trans girl. -She was skilled in drawing, and she prepared a painting as a present for her friend. -However, her friend only received the painting after her death. +She was skilled in drawing. +She once made a drawing as a present for her friend. +However, only after her death did her friend receive the drawing. -In the two Zhihu questions [How's meeting Xuewulihuameng irl?](https://www.zhihu.com/question/269853559) and [How to appraise the death-seeking behavior of Xuewulihuameng?](https://www.zhihu.com/question/268738337), many of her friends expressed their grief and said that she was really gentle. Even just before her departure, she still consoled and encouraged one of her friends. +In the Zhihu questions [How’s meeting Xuewulihuameng in real life?](https://www.zhihu.com/question/269853559) and [What do you think of the death-seeking tendencies of Xuewulihuameng?](https://www.zhihu.com/question/268738337), many of her friends expressed their grief and said that she was really kind. +Just before her departure, she still consoled and encouraged one of her friends. ## Her Departure -As mentioned at the beginning, "May kind souls be treated gently by the world." +Xueli wrote at the beginning, “May kind souls be treated kindly by the world.” But, Xueli herself was a kind, gentle girl... -On the afternoon and evening of April 1st, 2018, she was still living happily in this world. +From the afternoon to the evening of April 1st, 2018, she was still living happily in this world. -However, later on, -after failing to reveal her gender identity to her parents and browsing numerous negative messages on the internet, -she started to consider the idea of taking her own life. +However, that same night, she revealed her gender identity to her parents. Her parents reacted horribly. +Then, after browsing numerous negative messages on the internet, +she started to consider committing suicide. -On that quiet night, she left home for the Huanghuayuan Jialingjiang Bridge... +On that quiet night, without letting anyone know, she went to the Huanghuayuan Jialingjiang Bridge... -This is the last photo she left behind: +Following is the last photo she left behind: @@ -42,23 +44,19 @@ Looking into the distance from the bridge, the blurred lights seemed to be moistened by tears... After leaving a scheduled suicide note, Xueli chose to leave this world. -She wore a beautiful dress, -and there was still a sweet smile on her face when she was found. +When she was found, she wore a beautiful dress, smiling. -Her friend said that she was afraid of pain undoubtly. She always treated people around her gently, -but what she'd done was so cruel to herself... +but what she’d done was so cruel to herself...she was said to be afraid of pain after all. -## After Her Deperture +## After Her Departure -Xueli's friend [Futajuhuacha](https://one-among.us/profile/Futajuhuacha) was also a very gentle girl. +Xueli’s friend [Futajuhuacha](https://one-among.us/profile/Futajuhuacha) was also a very gentle girl. -After her left, Huacha deeply missed her and eventually chose to follow her to death in the same place. +After her departure, Huacha deeply missed her and eventually committed suicide on the same bridge. -Pray for these two girls in heaven. +“As if the vernal breeze had come back overnight, Adorning thousands of pear trees with blossoms white.” -"As if the vernal breeze had come back overnight, Adorning thousands of pear trees with blossoms white." - -We are waiting for the day gentle breeze comes again, +We are waiting for the day the gentle breeze comes again, and pear blossoms come out once more, also waiting for your return, reunion... From 928caba6aba010bb671a16d42c9c979f08a50e34 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Wed, 25 Dec 2024 15:26:46 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 2/4] grammarly --- people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md | 26 +++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md b/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md index 014e9cf7..14107ab1 100644 --- a/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md +++ b/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md @@ -6,10 +6,10 @@ info: ## Description -> A random rhythm game player! ! ! +> Random rhythm game player here! ! ! -Yuexi is a lively and adorable girl who loves to play various games, mainly music games. -There are somebody who she love and also loves her. +Yuexi was a lively and adorable girl who liked to play games, primarily music games. +She was in mutual love with someone. -Sometimes, she likes to go to the arcade in Xinjiekou[^1] to play maimaiDX a few times. +Sometimes, she played maimaiDX for a few turns at the arcade in Xinjiekou[^1]. -> The End ~ 9000 points achieved ~ I feel great today, 9 SSS+, 3 SSS and some small points, totally 99 points! +> I feel great today! ~ 9000 points achieved, 9 SSS+, 3 SSS and some small points, exactly 99 points! -Other times, she turns on her tablet to obtain ptt[^2] for a while. +Sometimes, she played Arcaea on her tablet to earn ptt[^2].
-This silly girl loves to eat barbecue, sometimes finishing a big plate all by herself. +She loved to eat barbecue; sometimes, she'd finish a big plate all by herself. How shortsighted. -Sometimes she even turns into a child. +Sometimes, she mentally turns into a child. > I caught a doll today, yay! -Loves you. +Love you. ## Departure -After she took a leave of absence from [Nanjing Agricultural University](https://rle.wiki/campus/NJAU.html) and returning home, her already unsustainable mental state deteriorated further.. +After she took a leave of absence from [Nanjing Agricultural University](https://rle.wiki/campus/NJAU.html) and returned home, her already fragile mental state deteriorated further. -> I can't muster the energy for the hobbies I once loved. What do I have left? Hmm... it seems I still have an interest in delicious food and beautiful clothes. Maybe... I can still save myself (laughs) +> I can’t muster the energy for the hobbies I once loved. What do I have left? Hmm... I might still have an interest in food and clothing. Maybe, just maybe, I can still save myself (laughs) -In the end, she chose to leave during the supposed joyous summer vacation +In the end, she chose to leave during the supposed joyous summer vacation. > Farewell, YueXi... [^1]: Xinjiekou, Nanjing. Located in the city center, it is the center of business and transportation. See also: [Xinjiekou, Nanjing: Wikipedia](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xinjiekou,_Nanjing) -[^2]: Potential. A numerical value used to measure player skill in the rhythm game Arcaea. \ No newline at end of file +[^2]: Potential. A numerical value used to measure player skill in the rhythm game Arcaea. From 23c4b3871d44b960a46ad3dbb2726d375331355b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Thu, 26 Dec 2024 01:50:21 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 3/4] use a different expression for suicide --- people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md b/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md index 9158215a..a09bd413 100644 --- a/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md +++ b/people/xuewulihuameng/page.en.md @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ From the afternoon to the evening of April 1st, 2018, she was still living happi However, that same night, she revealed her gender identity to her parents. Her parents reacted horribly. Then, after browsing numerous negative messages on the internet, -she started to consider committing suicide. +she started to consider taking her own life. On that quiet night, without letting anyone know, she went to the Huanghuayuan Jialingjiang Bridge... @@ -47,13 +47,13 @@ After leaving a scheduled suicide note, Xueli chose to leave this world. When she was found, she wore a beautiful dress, smiling. She always treated people around her gently, -but what she’d done was so cruel to herself...she was said to be afraid of pain after all. +but what she’d done was so cruel to herself...according to her friends, she was terrified of pain after all. ## After Her Departure Xueli’s friend [Futajuhuacha](https://one-among.us/profile/Futajuhuacha) was also a very gentle girl. -After her departure, Huacha deeply missed her and eventually committed suicide on the same bridge. +After her departure, Huacha deeply missed her and eventually ended her life on the same bridge. “As if the vernal breeze had come back overnight, Adorning thousands of pear trees with blossoms white.” From 434f8ca856e5f3f9039304b9e6e4e73f053d60f2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Thu, 26 Dec 2024 01:53:01 -0500 Subject: [PATCH 4/4] ptt --- people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md b/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md index 14107ab1..a2039cfb 100644 --- a/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md +++ b/people/xixi_yuexi/page.en.md @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Sometimes, she played maimaiDX for a few turns at the arcade in Xinjiekou[^1]. > I feel great today! ~ 9000 points achieved, 9 SSS+, 3 SSS and some small points, exactly 99 points! -Sometimes, she played Arcaea on her tablet to earn ptt[^2]. +Sometimes, she played Arcaea on her tablet to hone her skills (increase ptt[^2]).