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 > Good bye, Greenland-1
 
-## Description
+## Introduction
 
-Suigetsu, a gentle girl who is active on radio waves.
+Suigetsu was a gentle girl who was active on radio waves.
 
-Even though she sometimes shows her obsession with technology, is this also her lovely side?
+She sometimes seemed too obsessed with technology. However, that was also one aspect of her cuteness.
 
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-> Not Laziness, but truly lazy.
+> Not "taking time off", but truly lazy.
 >
-> Ah, date plays on yours?
+> Ah, wanna play?
 
 Truly a little fox she is~
 
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ Truly a little fox she is~
 
 > Greenland-1 balloon officially lost contact at 17:52:56 last night
 >
-> Greenland-1, codenamed SS1TP, was released at 17:43:13 on May 6. It carried an experimental amateur radio payload. However, due to the low antenna, power and flight altitude, the balloon was released at 9 minutes and 43 seconds. Loss of signal after seconds.
+> Greenland-1, codenamed SS1TP, was released at 17:43:13 on May 6. It carried an experimental amateur radio payload. However, due to the low antenna, power and flight altitude, the balloon was released at 9 minutes and 43 seconds and lost signal.
 
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-<BlurBlock>See you later, never again.</BlurBlock>
+<BlurBlock>See you later…no, never.</BlurBlock>