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 Sakuya had a passion for programming and the web since her childhood. She loved role-playing and simulation games.
 She had an interest in game development.
-She contributed to the development of many games, including *Pokémon Go* and *The Headmaster*.
-Besides being a talented programmer proficient in languages like Java, PHP, and C++, Sakuya was also skilled in stock trading and video editing.
+She helped develop many games, including *Pokémon Go* and *The Headmaster*.
+In addition to being a talented programmer proficient in languages like Java, PHP, and C++, Sakuya was also skilled in stock trading and video editing.
 She once founded a translation group.
 
-She started her own fashion company, but it went bankrupt, leading her to lose almost all her income sources.
+She started her own fashion company, but it went bankrupt due to financial problems, causing her to lose almost all her income sources.
 She wasn't able to make a comeback.
 Subsequently, she moved to Shanghai for a while.
 During her time in Shanghai, although she often worried about financial issues, she managed to spend her days relatively happily, thanks to the company and support of her friends.
@@ -29,4 +29,4 @@ Rest well, Sakuya. May you find happiness and peace. Wishing you a smooth journe
 
 Contributor for this entry: Nanami[^1]
 
-[^1]: Nanami, Sakuya's friend, who inherit and continue to use Sakuya's account.
+[^1]: Nanami, Sakuya's friend, inherits and continues to use Sakuya's account.