From 9b487da4574b68b378b5430773eb7faba3312876 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Tue, 20 Aug 2024 00:45:32 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] grammarly --- people/DarlinChit/page.en.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/DarlinChit/page.en.md b/people/DarlinChit/page.en.md index e9615d6b..ed1d07c5 100644 --- a/people/DarlinChit/page.en.md +++ b/people/DarlinChit/page.en.md @@ -9,11 +9,11 @@ info: Sakuya had a passion for programming and the web since her childhood. She loved role-playing and simulation games. She had an interest in game development. -She contributed to the development of many games, including *Pokémon Go* and *The Headmaster*. -Besides being a talented programmer proficient in languages like Java, PHP, and C++, Sakuya was also skilled in stock trading and video editing. +She helped develop many games, including *Pokémon Go* and *The Headmaster*. +In addition to being a talented programmer proficient in languages like Java, PHP, and C++, Sakuya was also skilled in stock trading and video editing. She once founded a translation group. -She started her own fashion company, but it went bankrupt, leading her to lose almost all her income sources. +She started her own fashion company, but it went bankrupt due to financial problems, causing her to lose almost all her income sources. She wasn't able to make a comeback. Subsequently, she moved to Shanghai for a while. During her time in Shanghai, although she often worried about financial issues, she managed to spend her days relatively happily, thanks to the company and support of her friends. @@ -29,4 +29,4 @@ Rest well, Sakuya. May you find happiness and peace. Wishing you a smooth journe Contributor for this entry: Nanami[^1] -[^1]: Nanami, Sakuya's friend, who inherit and continue to use Sakuya's account. +[^1]: Nanami, Sakuya's friend, inherits and continues to use Sakuya's account.