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 ## Description
 
-Yantian was our friend, they contributed to suicide intervention and other supports in transgender community, and accompanied others warmly and friendly.
+Yantian was our friend, they contributed to suicide intervention and other supports in transgender community and accompanied others warmly and friendly.
 
-Everyone liked them very much, and they got a intimate name “Sister Yantian”.
+Everyone liked them very much, and they got an intimate name “Sister Yantian”.
 
 They were also a [railfan](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Railfan), and their nickname originated from Shenzhen Metro Line 8 (also known as the Yantian Line).
 
@@ -17,24 +17,24 @@ By coincidence, before they celebrated their 23rd birthday, Line 8 Phase 2 opene
 
 ## Their Departure and Our Memorial
 
-At the end of 2023, Yantian was dealing with some trouble things happend in Guangdong. During this period, they overdrawn their energy, but they still overclocked (worked tirelessly) for everyone.
+At the end of 2023, Yantian was dealing with some troublesome things happening in Guangdong. During this period, they overdrawn their energy, but they still overclocked (worked tirelessly) for everyone.
 
-Owing to the need of maintaining better sleep, Yantian had been using sedatives for a long time, and their medication gradually exceeded the safe dose.
+Owing to the need to maintain better sleep, Yantian had been using sedatives for a long time, and their medication gradually exceeded the safe dose.
 Plus, they had overdrawn their energy a lot.
 These factors put their physical and mental health in danger.
 
 Yantian unfortunately left us due to cardiac arrest on 12th January 2024.
-One Among Us members were extremely shock and sad, too. 
-But we cannot push formal entry for them until people recovered from sadness.
+One Among Us members were extremely shocked and sad, too. 
+But we cannot push formal entry for them until people recover from sadness.
 
 Based on this, We temporarily set up a small room for them, to make their memorial warmer in this severe winter.
 
 If you wish, you can share your memory with Yantian by comment.
 
-> Tips: Your comments and memories in this memorial page will be considerated to be **referenced** by default. One Among Us editors will complete their formal entry with your helps. We will retain all approved comments in their formal entry.
+> Tips: Your comments and memories on this memorial page will be considered to be **referenced** by default. One Among Us editors will complete their formal entry with your help. We will retain all approved comments in their formal entry.
 >
-> If you don't hope your comment to be referenced, please mark out.
+> If you don't hope your comment to be referenced, please mark it out.
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-> You can send email to [info@one-among.us](mailto:info@one-among.us) to contribute photos or other rich text, or submit issue to our [Github repository](https://github.com/one-among-us/data).
+> You can send an email to [info@one-among.us](mailto:info@one-among.us) to contribute photos or other rich text or submit an issue to our [Github repository](https://github.com/one-among-us/data).
 
-Yantian, have a good rest...have a good sleep. Thank you for your efforts all this time.
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+Yantian, have a good rest...have a good sleep. Thank you for your efforts all this time.