[U] Update entry for hakureico

people/hakureico/page.en.md

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ and she enjoyed learning computer science.
 
 She was also a traffic-fan.
 She had interests on city bus, rail transit and national railways.
-Occasionally, she took a plane and looked at the blue sky outside the prothole.
+Occasionally, she took a plane and looked at the blue sky outside the porthole.
 
 Although those were always solo trips.
 
@@ -62,128 +62,53 @@ If a Giftia is not retrieved and deactivated before the end of their lifespan, i
 
 Hanasaka used this metaphor to describe her mental state about to collapse.
 
-五月份的时候，她用「Mayday[^1]」来传达自己已经接近极限的信号，好在后续转危为安。
+In May, she use "Mayday" to convey the signal that she was approaching her limit.
+Fortunately, she was out of danger late on.
 
-> 应答机 7700 MaydayMaydayMayday 降为 MaydayMayday
+> Responder 7700 **Mayday Mayday Mayday Mayday** has been downgraded to **Mayday Mayday Mayday**
 > 
-> 预计超重着陆
+> Expected overweight landing
 > 
-> 正在执行超重着陆检查单
+> Executing overweight landing checklist
 >
-> //大概我是只堕天使吧。
+> // I'm probably a fallen angel 
 >
-> //反复无常的心情，就和外面的天气一样。
+> // My unpredictable mood is just like the weather outside
 >
-> //之前转发的各位，敬请放心。不会坠毁！
+> // Please rest assured, everyone who forward my post. It won't crash!
 
-尽管她还和大家说，多出去走一走看看风景散散心，也说过「即使再绝望也要活下来啊。那样才有可能实现愿望的说。」这样的话语。
+Although she told everyone to go out and take a look at the scenery to relax,
+and she also said "Please keep alive even if you are desperate. In that case, you can make dreams come true."
 
-但她终究还是在 8 月的时候选择了离开。
+But she still chose to leave this world in August.
 
-离开之前，她委托了一位身在美国的铁路爱好者 Mizuki 在她的账号之上发布她的离世消息：
+Before that, she entrusted Mizuki, a railfan in United States to announce her death on her account.
 
-Mizuki 用一段故事和间断的讲述代替了冷冰冰的讣告。
+Mizuki told us a short story instead of publishing a cold obituary.
 
 > Finally went to hell as a devil.
 > 
 > updated 18-08-09
 
-这句话是千歌曾经的恋人留给她的，千歌曾不断地想知道，为何那段爱情会终结，最终却得到的是「去你的吧」的答案。
+The sentence was left by her boyfriend to her.
+She was seeking for the end of her first love, but she cannot receive an answer.
+even if the answer is "Go f*ck yourself"
 
-终究她也只能留下这样的话：
+Finally, she could only leave such words:
 
 > "May the world could treat you well."
 > 
 > "At least better than me."
 
-其实，哪里是什么要下地狱的恶魔呢？千歌是很温柔的人呢，有着助人型人格，常想着对方，而没考虑到自己。但或许，这也正是她与恋人分开的原因。
+In fact, how could she possibly be a devil going to hell?
+She was a gentle person with a "helper" personality.
+She always thought about others without considering herself.
+But perhaps it's also the reason why they aparted.
 
 At last, she burnt her belongings, and drown in the river that never stopped flowing.
 
 She had been in a world where no people would hate her, and no bad things would happen.
 
-## Different Words
-
-Now these accounts are free. May she free too.
-
-<!-- 由 Mizuki 写下这些文字，这里是 Mizuki。
-
-尽管有些难以说明究竟发生了什么，但这个账号的号主，
-已经
-在一个不会有人讨厌着她，也不会发生不好的事情的世界里了。
-朋友们，是时候睡个好觉了呢，保持微笑，要一直活下去呢。
-
-就如同她曾经的男朋友所说，
-“成为了魔鬼，最终堕入地狱。”
-
-“你真是个笨蛋啊。”
-“她是我的猎物。”
-“为什么不多自杀几次呢？”
-她的男朋友说。
-
-许多次以后，
-她的朋友有了另一个男朋友，
-而他想要她放弃自杀。 -->
-
-Written by mizuki. mizuki here.
-Although hard to say
-the original owner of this account
-has been
-in a world
-where no people would hate her
-and no bad things would happen.
-time to sleep friends,
-and keep smiling, keep alive.
-
-as her boyfriend said
-finally went to hell as devil.
-
-"You are an idiot"
-"She is my own prey"
-"Why not commit suicide several more times"
-her boyfriend said.
-
-after several times
-her friend had another boyfriend
-and he wanted her to give up
-
-seeking for the end of her first love
-but cannot receive an answer
-even if the answer is "Go fuck yourself"
-
-<!-- 她找寻着她第一次爱的尽头，但是没办法得到一个答案，即使答案是“去你的吧！” -->
-
-they once were a pairing.
-but apart as she had a "helper" personality.
-
-<!-- 他们曾经是一对，
-但是分开了，因为她有着“帮助者”的人格 -->
-
-
-## About comments
-
-:| http://zhihu.com has a so shitty experience on reading comments without being fucked by recommended passages and its following advertisement...btw she told me read comments till 8/16.
-
-<!-- 知乎的浏览体验真他妈的差劲啊，还有一堆推荐消息和什么广告，但是她告诉我要一直看到8月16号的评论。 -->
-
-## Other words of mizuki
-
-I read about her leftover messages in her chatting software.
-
-<!-- 我看了她聊天软件之中留下的消息 -->
-
-She was trapped in a triangle of love. :(
-
-<!-- 她被困在三角恋爱之中 -->
-
-Another thing is that My work has done, including taking care of her accounts.
-
-<!-- 另外就是，我该做的已经结束了，包括关注她的这些账号。 -->
-
-Now these accounts are free. May she free too.
-
-<!-- 现在这些账号都将释放，她的灵魂也该释然了。 -->
-
 ## Her Letter
 
 Hanasaka left a letter for her only friend:

people/hakureico/page.md

@@ -67,9 +67,9 @@ Giftia，是《可塑性记忆》中的人形智能机器人，有着人类的
 
 但她终究还是在 8 月的时候选择了离开。
 
-离开之前，她委托了一位身在美国的铁路爱好者 Mizuki 在她的账号之上发布她的离世消息：
+离开之前，她委托了一位身在美国的铁路爱好者 Mizuki 在她的账号之上发布她的离世消息。
 
-Mizuki 用一段故事和间断的讲述代替了冷冰冰的讣告。
+Mizuki 用一段故事和间断的讲述代替了冷冰冰的讣告：
 
 > Finally went to hell as a devil.
 > 

people/hakureico/page.zh_hant.md

@@ -68,14 +68,15 @@ Giftia，是《可塑性記憶》中的人形智慧型機器人，有著人類
 
 但她終究還是在 8 月的時候選擇了離去。
 
-離開之前，她委託了一位身在美國的鐵道愛好者 Mizuki 在她的帳戶之上發佈她的離世消息：
+離開之前，她委託了一位身在美國的鐵道愛好者 Mizuki 在她的帳戶之上發佈她的離世消息。
+
+
+Mizuki 用一段故事和間斷的敘述代替了冷冰冰的訃告：
 
 > Finally went to hell as a devil.
 > 
 > updated 18-08-09
 
-Mizuki 用一段故事和間斷的敘述代替了冷冰冰的訃告。
-
 這句話是千歌曾經的戀人留給她的，千歌曾不斷地想知道，為何那段愛情會終結，最終卻得到的是「去你的吧」的答案。
 
 終究她也只能留下這樣的話：