From a5291c2d83384c71b141b62c162167171c93e3aa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Thu, 7 Nov 2024 01:39:01 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] grammarly free --- people/a2581911655/page.en.md | 24 ++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/a2581911655/page.en.md b/people/a2581911655/page.en.md index 19f308dc..e8948273 100644 --- a/people/a2581911655/page.en.md +++ b/people/a2581911655/page.en.md @@ -5,17 +5,17 @@ info: location: Urumqi, Xinjiang --- -## Description +## Introduction -Chewing Gum was a trans girl loving life and caring about others. +Chewing Gum was a trans girl enthusiastic about life. -On Bilibili, she posted videos of various games, most of which belonged to vehicle simulation game, including *World Truck - Driving Simulator*, *Spintires: MudRunner* and so on. -She also played PUBG and Genshin Impact, which were currently popular games. +On Bilibili, she posted recordings of various games, most of which belonged to the vehicle simulation genre, including *World Truck - Driving Simulator*, *Spintires: MudRunner*, and so on. +She also played popular games like PUBG and Genshin Impact. -She had a good hands-on ability, and conducted DIY on many devices by herself, -she also did some little experiences with her own hands. +She had good dexterity and DIYed many electronics. +She also did some mini-experiments. -On her road of exploring being a girl, she once had sense of inferiority, confusion, and anxiety, but she still lived strongly for a long time. +Her road of discovering what it means to be a girl was filled with inferiority, confusion, and anxiety; yet, she still lived fiercely for a long time, leaving behind many beautiful memories. Following are some personal photos she left in this world: @@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ Following are some personal photos she left in this world: At the end of 2023, she planned a 3-month journey. -During the time, she came to Guangdong, and got into [Yantian](https://one-among.us/profile/SS3B_0016/)'s Iveco van. She tweeted: +During her journey, she went to Guangdong, and got into [Yantian](https://one-among.us/profile/SS3B_0016/)'s Iveco van. She tweeted: > “It was comfortable to sit on the front passenger-side seat of Yantian's van~” -After that, she arrived in Shanghai, Zhejiang, and Henan, and met with many friends. +After that, she went to Shanghai, Zhejiang, and Henan to meet some friends. -On January 18th, 2024, she ended her journey reluctantly and said that she won't able to see everyone again until one and a half year later. +On January 18th, 2024, she ended her journey reluctantly, "I won't able to see everyone again until one and a half years later." -But she couldn't fulfill her appointment. -The farewell is a life and death parted. Two days later, she attempted to take her life, and finally left us forever. +But she couldn't fulfill her promise. +Two days later, she attempted to take her life, and now we're separated by life and death.