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 ## Description
 
-Mushroom was a trans girl who made efforts to live.
+Mushroom was a trans girl who tried to live.
 
 She shared her daily life on social media,
 sometimes posting photos of herself.
-Her answers in Zhihu questions also included her shared content and photos.
+Her answers to Zhihu questions also included her daily life and photos.
 
-Her favourite dessert was sweet strawberry sundae,
-and she also enjoyed drinking canned iced cola.
+Her favourite dessert was a sweet strawberry sundae.
+She also enjoyed drinking canned iced cola.
 
-In order to support herself,
-she attended an interview to become a network anchor for MOMO,
-and she achieved a significant milestone initially.
-The female colleagues at her company understood her transgender identity and challenges.
-They encouraged her to be herself and move forward,
-one of them invited her to be a guest at home.
+To support herself,
+she attended an interview to become a streamer for MOMO,
+and she achieved a significant milestone soon after starting.
+The women colleagues at her company understood her transgender identity and challenges.
+They encouraged her to be herself and move forward;
+one of them even invited her to her house.
 
-When she was tired, she would also treat herself with food and drinks.
+When she was tired, she would treat herself with food and drinks.
 
-Her father was gradually in favour of her,
-and she started looking forward to completing SRS.
+Her father started to support her gradually,
+so she started looking forward to SRS.
 
 Mushroom had a girlfriend.
 They met on February 11th, 2017, and accompanied each other for several months.
-They once watched the scenery of Shenzhen Fisherman Wharf and many exciting movies,
-they also enjoyed endless delicious food.
+They visited Shenzhen Fisherman Wharf, watched many exciting movies, and enjoyed endless delicious foods.
 
 ## Her Departure
 
-Mushroom was struggling with depression,
-and she needed to take several kinds of medicine.
+Mushroom has always been struggling with depression,
+and she needed to take several kinds of medicine daily.
 
-"The doctor said to me that if I took medicine regularly, everything would go well."
+“The doctor said that if I take these medicines regularly, everything would be fine.”
 
-"In fact, I don't want to kill myself. I always endeavour to live."
+“I don’t really wanna die. I always endeavour to live.”
 
 ……
 
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 ## After Her Departure
 
-Mushroom once excerpted a passage from Shen Nanxi's answer in Zhihu question [What are your favourite sentences orpersonal status?](https://www.zhihu.com/question/36442613/answer/207763687) as a reflection to herself.
+Mushroom once excerpted a passage from Shen Nanxi's answer to Zhihu question [What are your favourite sentences orpersonal status?](https://www.zhihu.com/question/36442613/answer/207763687) as a reflection to herself.
 
 > There is only one hell in this world,
 > 
 > which is the world we live in now.
 >
-> You may think you are so kind because you are a fallen angel,
+> You may think you are kind because you are a fallen angel,
 > 
-> but actually you are just the weakest amidst the devils.
+> but you are just the weakest amidst the devils.
 
-After Mushroom's departure, Shen Nanxi wrote a [memorial essay](https://archive.md/hQ7AS) for her to express her mourning.
+After Mushroom’s departure, Shen Nanxi wrote a [memorial essay](https://archive.md/hQ7AS) for her to express her mourning.
 
 > At last, I wish you well.
 >
@@ -66,4 +65,4 @@ After Mushroom's departure, Shen Nanxi wrote a [memorial essay](https://archive.
 >
 > in that distant and warm world.
 
-Goodnight, Mushroom. May you be a happy mushroom in another world🍄
+Goodnight, Mushroom. May you be a happy mushroom in another world🍄.