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## Description
Hanasaka was a trans girl who was lively and lovely.
She studied in School of Mathematics at Liaoning Normal University.
She studied in the School of Mathematics at Liaoning Normal University.
She was proficient in mathematics and enjoyed learning computer science.
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She was good at playing music game OSU, and uploaded many videos of her gameplay.
She was still online even she was in a bad mental condition.
She was good at playing rhythm game OSU, and uploaded many videos of her gameplay.
She was still online even when she was in a bad mental condition.
Hanasaka also focused on several kinds of games,
such as *THE iDOLM@STER SHINY COLORS* and *Nekopara*.
Sadly, she gradually lost interest in games due to life pressure,
and she no longer updated her activities on games afterwards.
and she no longer updated her activities in games afterwards.
For some reasons, her mental health got worse since March 2018. Luckily, there were still people who cared about her.
In early June 2018, she went to IKEA with an acquaintance, and eat tasty and affordable ice cream corns together.
For some reason, her mental health worsened since March 2018. Luckily, there were still people who cared about her.
In early June 2018, she went to IKEA with an acquaintance, and ate tasty and affordable ice cream cones together.
## Her Departure
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> updated 18-08-09
The sentence was left by her boyfriend to her.
She was seeking for the end of her first love, but she cannot receive an answer.
She was seeking the end of her first love, but she cannot receive an answer.
even if the answer was "Go f*ck yourself"
Finally, she could only leave such words:
> "May the world could treat you well."
> "May the world treat you well."
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> "At least better than me."