From b11fc28bf875121c408523e53d80f327f08521b8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Tue, 20 Aug 2024 01:33:39 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] grammarly --- people/Jennife80677612/page.en.md | 22 +++++++++++----------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/Jennife80677612/page.en.md b/people/Jennife80677612/page.en.md index 439e4dda..3080ea40 100644 --- a/people/Jennife80677612/page.en.md +++ b/people/Jennife80677612/page.en.md @@ -20,13 +20,13 @@ info: Jennifer was a trans girl longing for happiness. Her avatar was Vtuber Yukihana Lamy, -and she enjoyed playing rhythm game Project Sekai. +and she enjoyed playing the rhythm game Project Sekai. When she was 13 years old, she told her parents for the first time, "**I want to be a girl.**" However, her parents dismissed it, thinking that she was influenced by her classmates, -and strongly denied her thought with harsh words. +and vehemently denied her thoughts with harsh words. At that time, Jennifer didn't know what "transgender" meant, but she understood the negative connotation of her parents' harsh words. @@ -41,12 +41,12 @@ but it was only the beginning of her nightmare. After starting junior high school, she tried to make her parents understand her better. -So she start to find information about "transgender" online. +So, she starts to find information about "transgender" online. She even read academic papers, attempting to communicate with her parents. Jennifer said: -> "Transgender identity is something I was born with... It's just that a girl's soul is in the wrong body. I don't even ask for SRS. But can you just let me wear girls' clothes, and grow my hair long? I know I'm not pretty, but is it a crime to want to wear girls' clothes?" +> "Transgender identity is something I was born with... It's just that a girl's soul is in the wrong body. I don't even ask for SRS. But can you just let me wear girls' clothes and grow my hair long? I know I'm not pretty, but is it a crime to want to wear girls' clothes?" But all her efforts were in vain, and what she received in return was more scolding. @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ Due to her lack of education, she could only work at a local beverage shop, earning just enough to make ends meet. -But she knew it would be a long time to escape her original family. +But she knew it would be a long time before she could escape her original family. She had to present herself as male for job interviews and work, and everyone referred to her with the wrong pronouns, @@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ which caused her great distress. > "I really can't live with a mask on... Is it so hard to be myself..." -Despite this, she felt that even working as a server every day was better than staying in the suffocating environment at home. +Despite this, she felt that working as a server every day was better than staying in her suffocating home environment. She seemed to see a glimmer of hope. During that time, she even thought that if she could just endure and save enough money, @@ -97,22 +97,22 @@ her heart had grown numb. ## Departure -Jennifer once said, "Jennifer is a strong girl nya~ Jennifer won't block anyone." +Jennifer once said, "Jennifer is a strong girl, nya~ Jennifer won't block anyone." But there was one time, and the last time, she made an exception: -"I blocked the account of Han Lianyi. I think she's a great person, but I don't want her to save me. I'm sorry, Sister Han, I'm so sorry..." +"I blocked Han Lianyi's account. I think she's a great person, but I don't want her to save me. I'm sorry, Sister Han, I'm so sorry..." As the New Year approached, -fireworks and firecrackers were alight with spark, +fireworks and firecrackers were alight with sparks, carrying people's best wishes. The warm glow of lights filled thousands of homes. But Jennifer left this world in the biting cold wind, -Her story remained in the New Year's Eve. +Her story remained on New Year's Eve. Brief illusions brought her happiness and kept her from the cold... @@ -121,4 +121,4 @@ she never got to take estrogen, wear a beautiful dress, or be called "Miss." -Jennifer, may you no longer suffer and find the happiness in another world. +Jennifer, may you no longer suffer and find the happiness you deserve in another world.