diff --git a/people/lxyddice/page.en.md b/people/lxyddice/page.en.md index f5cde34d..31e4d6d9 100644 --- a/people/lxyddice/page.en.md +++ b/people/lxyddice/page.en.md @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ There were countless things about her that left a lasting impression on those wh ## Her Departure -lxy’s sudden departure was a tremendous shock to her friends. +Lxy’s sudden departure was a tremendous shock to her friends. She left behind only a few words, but they were filled with warmth and care for those around her. diff --git a/people/lxyddice/page.md b/people/lxyddice/page.md index 0f406578..bb35b364 100644 --- a/people/lxyddice/page.md +++ b/people/lxyddice/page.md @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ lxy 是明日方舟的 W 酱厨,在很多平台上都用着 W 酱作为头像 ## 离开 -lxy 的离开,对她的朋友们,都是很震惊的事情…… +lxy 的离开对她的朋友们来说,都是非常猝不及防的事情…… 她只给大家留下了寥寥数语,却饱含对大家的善意与关心。 diff --git a/people/lxyddice/page.zh_hant.md b/people/lxyddice/page.zh_hant.md index 2c58ad23..b4e015bd 100644 --- a/people/lxyddice/page.zh_hant.md +++ b/people/lxyddice/page.zh_hant.md @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ lxy 是明日方舟的 W 醬廚,在很多平臺上都用著 W 醬作為頭像 ## 離開 -lxy 的離開,對她的朋友們,都是很震驚的事情…… +lxy 的離開對她的朋友們來說,都是非常猝不及防的事情…… 她只給大家留下了寥寥數語,卻飽含對大家的善意與關心。