From bb50cf1b24d3189f576fbdc31f6fd69b951c692f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Sun, 24 Dec 2023 11:36:35 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] [F]: fix grammar --- people/MioCardMeow/page.en.md | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/MioCardMeow/page.en.md b/people/MioCardMeow/page.en.md index ec743eeb..840d0f65 100644 --- a/people/MioCardMeow/page.en.md +++ b/people/MioCardMeow/page.en.md @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ --- -name: miocardmeow +name: MioCardMeow info: alias: Ling Ka Miao, Lingka, Ling, MioCardMeow location: Beijing, China @@ -7,11 +7,11 @@ info: ## Description -MioCardMeow is a trans girl. People's appraisal to her was "very lovely and kind-heart". Her mother said the same thing as well. +MioCardMeow is a trans girl. People think of her as "very lovely and kind-hearted". Her mother said the same thing as well. -MioCardMeow learnt numerical control technique in school. She was also a well-known reporter of Kanoguti songs. +MioCardMeow's major is numerical control. She was also well-known as a translator of *Kanoguti* songs. -She loved lovely skirts, and often wore kinds of stockings. +She loved lovely skirts, and wore all kinds of stockings. She was also skilled at cooking, and she always cooked delicious food. @@ -27,15 +27,15 @@ She liked to take photos of landscape. and recorded those beautiful moment of na '${path}/photos/photo7.jpg', ]} /> -She knew how to use Tarot for divination. Although according to her friends, it seems that she often got "bad results" in divination. +She knew how to use Tarot for divination. Although according to her friends, it seems that she often got bad predictions in divination. -SugarMeow said, in fact, MioCardMeow was a clingy girl. It was a pity that she cannot accompany her more due to studies. +SugarMeow said, in fact, MioCardMeow was in fact a clingy girl. It was a pity that she couldn't be with her more due to her studies. ## Departure -The unfriendly family environment and negative impact of long-term medication (pituitary adenoma) gave rise to her thoughts of suicide. She passed away after an unsuccessful resuscitation. +Her hostile family and negative impact of long-term medication (pituitary adenoma) gave rise to her suicidal thoughts. She passed away after an unsuccessful resuscitation. -Her departure was reported by [Miao Xiao Bai](https://twitter.com/pizyj/status/1492928433172582400?s=21) on Feburary 14th 2022. +Her departure was reported by [Miao Xiao Bai](https://twitter.com/pizyj/status/1492928433172582400?s=21) on Feburary 14th, 2022. ## After Her Leaving @@ -43,4 +43,4 @@ MioCardMeow had a good friendship with SugarMeow. After her departure, SugarMeow > I am afraid of forgetting her... I like her a lot. She was lovely, gentle, polite... and she always took care of me... -Contributors for this entry: [SugarMeow](https://space.bilibili.com/618333512), [Asaka Minamikawa](https://twitter.com/GE90Start), [Lee](https://twitter.com/rbqwansui), One-Among-Us \ No newline at end of file +Contributors for this entry: [SugarMeow](https://space.bilibili.com/618333512), [Asaka Minamikawa](https://twitter.com/GE90Start), [Lee](https://twitter.com/rbqwansui), One-Among-Us