diff --git a/people/BI4PBV/page.en.md b/people/BI4PBV/page.en.md index 8a527935..affcb3d5 100644 --- a/people/BI4PBV/page.en.md +++ b/people/BI4PBV/page.en.md @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ She sometimes seemed too obsessed with technology. However, that was also one as -> Not "taking time off", but truly lazy. +> Not just taking a break, but truly lazy, no mistake. > > Ah, wanna play? diff --git a/people/Rentable_A/page.en.md b/people/Rentable_A/page.en.md index 4c29a4c1..81e93987 100644 --- a/people/Rentable_A/page.en.md +++ b/people/Rentable_A/page.en.md @@ -19,15 +19,15 @@ info: Rentable, a girl who looked a little mysterious, was from Xinxiang, Henan. Despite this, she always seemed lively when she was with her friends. -> Sometimes I take many kinds of drugs... +Sometimes she took many kinds of drugs... -She has someone she cares about. +She had someone she cared about. > My brain is like a ball of paste wrapped up. > I can’t even remember what happened more than ten seconds ago. > That's it...good night. -After [YanTian](https://one-among.us/profile/SS3B_0016) passed away, she tried to leave this world by cutting her wrists. +After [YanTian](https://one-among.us/profile/SS3B_0016) passed away, she tried to leave this world by cutting her wrists. > That feeling of being stripped away bit by bit. > Watching myself encounter another self in the hallucination.