From bf6d3876107309610726f040cefa3ed6698e02ac Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Collapsar <89363085+Tiffany-W@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 10 Aug 2024 01:28:40 +0800 Subject: [PATCH] Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Amika --- people/luxuanwen3/page.en.md | 33 ++++++++++++++++++++++--------- people/luxuanwen3/page.md | 14 +++++++------ people/luxuanwen3/page.zh_hant.md | 14 +++++++------ 3 files changed, 40 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/luxuanwen3/page.en.md b/people/luxuanwen3/page.en.md index da70ad4f..c01a8ce8 100644 --- a/people/luxuanwen3/page.en.md +++ b/people/luxuanwen3/page.en.md @@ -1,19 +1,28 @@ --- name: Nini info: - alias: 鲵鲵,Nini - location: Jiyuan, Henan Province, China + alias: 鲵鲵, Nini + location: Jiyuan, Henan --- ## Description -**Nini** is a sweet transgender girl who has a keen interest in computers, experiences some anxiety, and is generally warm and friendly. She was taking medication and exogenous hormones on month-basis. Her avatar was created by the talented artist ディーバ/Deaver (@Deaver1229). +**Nini** was a sweet trans girl with a keen interest in computers. She experienced some anxiety, and was generally warm and friendly. +She took medication and exogenous hormones on a monthly basis. Her avatar was created by the talented artist ディーバ/Deaver](https://x.com/Deaver1229). -However, her parents had a lot of reservations about transgenderism, so she was closely monitored, and the only sister who can relate to her had difficulty communicating with her due to distance and academic commitments. +However, her parents were resolutely opposed to her transgender identity and expression, so she was closely monitored. +The only sister who truly understood her found it difficult to communicate owing to distance and academic pressures. -Towards the end of July 2024, there was a extreme increase in the conflict between Nini and her parents. Her parents decided to stop her hormone replacement therapy and other medications, and they began to regard her as a rebel against orthodox. This was the first time she had considered taking her own life. After taking a significant amount of drugs and leaving her home, she was fortunate to be found by passersby after collapsing on the street. Subsequently, Nini was unable to access the drugs. +Towards the end of July 2024, there was an extreme increase in conflict between Nini and her parents. +Her parents decided to stop her hormone replacement therapy and other medications, and they began to regard her as rebelling against orthodoxy. +This was the first time she had considered taking her own life. +After taking a significant amount of drugs and leaving her home, she was fortunate to be found by passersby after collapsing on the street. +Subsequently, Nini was unable to access the drugs. -At 11:55 p.m. on August 4, 2024,Nini made the last decision. After posting her final tweet, she took an overdose of chemicals. Her close friends rushed around trying to bring her back. However,at 3 a.m. the next morning, Nini left us to pursue her own path and seek her own freedom. +At 11:55 p.m. on August 4, 2024, Nini made her final decision. +After posting her last tweet, she took an overdose of chemicals. +Her close friends rushed to save her. +However, at 3 a.m. the next morning, Nini left us to pursue her own path and seek her freedom. @@ -21,10 +30,16 @@ At 11:55 p.m. on August 4, 2024,Nini made the last decision. After posting her f > the right to love without limits. >

― Albert Camus, Lyrical and Critical Essays

-Nini is very warm to people, though this is not always evident in her outward demeanor. Rather, it is reflected in the pieces of her words that contain her equal and full love for everyone. She may call you "babe" and offer a hug. She will patiently explain what you don't know and try not to pass on her negativity to her friends. +Nini was very warm to people, though this was not always evident in her outward demeanor. +Rather, it was reflected in the pieces of her words that conveyed her equal and full love for everyone. +She might call you "babe" and offer a hug. +She would patiently explain what you didn't know and try not to pass on her negativity to her friends. > Hope you find your peace in silence. > Good night and wake up in a brand new world. -I (@Collapsar_ndn) haven't known Nini for very long, but I'm still affected by her positive energy, and I welcome all the other friends to contribute to the text and reminisce about our former friend,Nini. -Thanks for your help to Nini. @awxs_2081573566 @Bolichara0 @N552AA \ No newline at end of file +I (The author of this entry) hadn't known Nini for very long, but I was still deeply affected by her positive energy. +I invite all our friends to contribute to this entry and share memories of our dear friend, Nini. +Thanks for your help to Nini. @awxs_2081573566 @Bolichara0 @N552AA + +Contributor for this entry: [Collapsar_ndn](https://twitter.com/Collapsar_ndn) \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/people/luxuanwen3/page.md b/people/luxuanwen3/page.md index 500a811b..daa66563 100644 --- a/people/luxuanwen3/page.md +++ b/people/luxuanwen3/page.md @@ -2,18 +2,18 @@ name: 鲵鲵 info: alias: 鲵鲵 - location: 河南 济源 + location: 河南济源 --- ## 简介 -**鲵鲵**是一位可爱的跨性别女生，喜欢电脑，略有焦虑，对人热情。她的头像出自艺术家ディーバ/Deaver(@Deaver1229)之笔 +鲵鲵是一位可爱的跨性别女生，喜欢电脑，略有焦虑，对人热情。她的头像出自艺术家 [ディーバ/Deaver](https://twitter.com/Deaver1229) 笔下。 但是她的家长对跨性别持绝对的反对，因此她被严管，唯一能够理解她的姐姐也因地域和学业的缘故难以跟她沟通。 -2024年七月末，鲵鲵与家长的矛盾激化。她所有的HRT等药物被尽数丢弃，被父母视为离经叛道的异者。这是她第一次萌生自尽的念头；服下大量药物后离家，昏倒在街头后被路人救起。此后，鲵鲵被断绝了获取药物的途径。 +2024 年七月末，鲵鲵与家长的矛盾激化。她所有的 HRT 药物等被尽数丢弃，被父母视为离经叛道的异者。这是她第一次萌生自尽的念头；服下大量药物后离家，昏倒在街头后被路人救起。此后，鲵鲵被断绝了获取药物的途径。 -在2024年八月四日晚11时55分，鲵鲵做出了决绝的选择。在发送了最后一条推文之后，服下了超量的化学药品，她的好友们多方奔走，想要留下她，留住此世间独特的她。在次日凌晨三点，鲵鲵离开了我们，去寻求属于自己的自由。 +在 2024 年 8 月 4日晚 11 时 55 分，鲵鲵做出了决绝的选择。在发送了最后一条推文之后，服下了超量的化学药品，她的好友们多方奔走，想要留下她，留住此世间独特的她。在次日凌晨三点，鲵鲵离开了我们，去寻求属于自己的自由。 @@ -28,5 +28,7 @@ info: > Hope you find your peace in silence. > Good night and wake up in a brand new world. -笔者(@Collapsar_ndn)与鲵鲵相识的时间并不长，但仍被她的氛围所感染，也欢迎所有其他朋友补充，一同怀念曾经的好友。 -最后再次感谢所有曾经帮助过、想要帮助过鲵鲵的朋友 @awxs_2081573566 @Bolichara0 @N552AA \ No newline at end of file +笔者与鲵鲵相识的时间并不长，但仍被她的氛围所感染，也欢迎所有其他朋友补充，一同怀念曾经的好友。 +最后再次感谢所有曾经帮助过，和想要帮助过鲵鲵的朋友们： @awxs_2081573566 @Bolichara0 @N552AA + +条目贡献：[Collapsar_ndn](https://twitter.com/Collapsar_ndn) \ No newline at end of file diff --git a/people/luxuanwen3/page.zh_hant.md b/people/luxuanwen3/page.zh_hant.md index fb3060cc..93acccae 100644 --- a/people/luxuanwen3/page.zh_hant.md +++ b/people/luxuanwen3/page.zh_hant.md @@ -2,18 +2,18 @@ name: 鯢鯢 info: alias: 鯢鯢 - location: 河南 濟源 + location: 河南濟源 --- ## 簡介 -**鯢鯢**是一位可愛的跨性別女生，喜歡電腦，略有焦慮，對人熱情。她的頭像出自藝術家ディーバ/Deaver(@Deaver1229)之筆 +鯢鯢是一位可愛的跨性別女生，喜歡計算機，略有焦慮，對人熱情。她的頭像出自藝術家 [ディーバ/Deaver](https://twitter.com/Deaver1229) 筆下。 但是她的家長對跨性別持絕對的反對，因此她被嚴管，唯一能夠理解她的姐姐也因地域和學業的緣故難以跟她溝通。 -2024年七月末，鯢鯢與家長的矛盾激化。她所有的HRT等藥物被盡數丟棄，被父母視爲離經叛道的異者。這是她第一次萌生自盡的念頭；服下大量藥物後離家，昏倒在街頭後被路人救起。此後，鯢鯢被斷絕了獲取藥物的途徑。 +2024 年七月末，鯢鯢與家長的矛盾激化。她所有的 HRT 藥物等被盡數丟棄，被父母視爲離經叛道的異者。這是她第一次萌生自盡的念頭；服下大量藥物後離家，昏倒在街頭後被路人救起。此後，鯢鯢被斷絕了獲取藥物的途徑。 -在2024年八月四日晚11時55分，鯢鯢做出了決絕的選擇。在發送了最後一條推文之後，服下了超量的化學藥品，她的好友們多方奔走，想要留下她，留住此世間獨特的她。在次日凌晨三點，鯢鯢離開了我們，去尋求屬於自己的自由。 +在 2024 年 8 月 4 日晚 11 時 55 分，鯢鯢做出了決絕的選擇。在發送了最後一條推文之後，服下了超量的化學藥品，她的好友們多方奔走，想要留下她，留住此世間獨特的她。在次日凌晨三點，鯢鯢離開了我們，去尋求屬於自己的自由。 > 在這兒我領悟瞭 @@ -27,5 +27,7 @@ info: > Hope you find your peace in silence. > Good night and wake up in a brand new world. -筆者(@Collapsar_ndn)與鯢鯢相識的時間並不長，但仍被她的氛圍所感染，也歡迎所有其他朋友補充，一同懷念曾經的好友。 -最後再次感謝所有曾經幫助過、想要幫助過鯢鯢的朋友 @awxs_2081573566 @Bolichara0 @N552AA +筆者與鯢鯢相識的時間並不長，但仍被她的氛圍所感染，也歡迎所有其他朋友補充，一同懷念曾經的好友。 +最後再次感謝所有曾經幫助過、想要幫助過鯢鯢的朋友們： @awxs_2081573566 @Bolichara0 @N552AA + +條目貢獻：[Collapsar_ndn](https://twitter.com/Collapsar_ndn)