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[U] Revise phrasing

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Azalea 2023-11-23 00:35:56 -05:00
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@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Barron was a happy transgirl who studied painting in Japan. She had a dream to o
After returned China, she lost almost all her financial resources. To make matters even worse, she was unable to draw again due to her serious PTSD. She found good friends in Guangzhou who could accompany her, and then live shortly at Beijing. During her live in Beijing, although she was often worried about finance and other issues, he was quite happy with everyone's comfort. She said that she was on a girl's final journey...
However, due to financial reason and her love, she returned to Guangzhou at the end of August. She and her love spent a happy time in Guangzhou, although they had to rely on sex work to survive. But due to the conflict with her love, she finally chose to leave.
However, due to financial reason and her love, she returned to Guangzhou at the end of August. She and her love spent a happy time in Guangzhou, although they had to rely on sex work to survive. Even though she faced challenges in her relationship, she bravely confronted the trials of life. Tragically, she has left us too soon.
The Barron's final journey is end, and I hope she have a happy trip to the heaven.

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回国后她失去了几乎所有的经济来源。更难的是由于其严重的PTSD她无法再次拿起画笔了。她在广州找到了能陪伴他的好朋友后又前往北京暂居。在北京的日子里虽然他时常担心经济等问题但在大家的安慰下他过得还算开心。她自己说她正在进行少女终末旅行……
但出于经济压力与对象的原因其于8月末返回了广州。在广州她和她对象度过了一段开心的时光尽管她们只能依靠援交度日。但由于她与她对象的矛盾,最后她还是选择了离开
但出于经济压力与对象的原因其于8月末返回了广州。在广州她和她对象度过了一段开心的时光尽管她们只能依靠援交度日。尽管她与对象之间存在一些矛盾,但她勇敢地面对了生活的挑战。不幸的是,她最终离我们而去
巴伦的少女终末旅行结束了,希望往参宿四一路顺风。

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回國後,她失去了幾乎所有的經濟來源。 更難的是由於其嚴重的PTSD她無法再次拿起畫筆了。 她在廣州找到了能陪伴他的好朋友,後來又前往北京暫居。 在北京的日子裡,雖然他常常擔心經濟等問題,但在大家的安慰下,他過得還算開心。 她自己說,她正在進行少女終末旅行…
但出於經濟壓力與對象的原因其於8月末返回了廣州。 在廣州她和她對象度過了一段開心的時光,儘管她們只能依靠援交度日。 但由於她與她對象的矛盾,最後她還是選擇了離開
但出於經濟壓力與對象的原因其於8月末返回了廣州。 在廣州她和她對象度過了一段開心的時光,儘管她們只能依靠援交度日。 儘管她與對象之間存在一些矛盾,但她勇敢地面對了生活的挑戰。不幸的是,她最終離我們而去
巴倫的少女終末旅行結束了,希望往參宿四一路順風。