From ca593592fbbd8a5841367c954af1f6cd864c4e1b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Mon, 19 Aug 2024 23:37:40 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] refine with grammarly --- people/Acheron/page.en.md | 11 +++++++---- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/Acheron/page.en.md b/people/Acheron/page.en.md index 27ebbdb9..16f3a99e 100644 --- a/people/Acheron/page.en.md +++ b/people/Acheron/page.en.md @@ -10,12 +10,15 @@ info: Acheron was a young trans girl who was lovely, brave, and kind-hearted. She uploaded several Minecraft gameplay videos on Bilibili. -She once excavated an entire chunk in Minecraft with nine friends in the speedrun community in just 30:17. +She once excavated an entire chunk in Minecraft with nine friends in the Speedrun community in just 30:17. -Acheron was also knowledgeable in technology. +Acheron was not just a gamer but also a tech enthusiast. +She was knowledgeable in various aspects of technology, +from hardware to software, +and often shared her insights with the community. She uploaded two notable videos: -one is unboxing the BearPi-HM Nano development board, -and the other is installing Klipper based on Debian 10. +one is unboxing the BearPi-HM Nano development board. +The other is installing Klipper based on Debian 10. ## Departure