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 ## Description
 
-Zihe is a non-binary ally of us, whose pronouns are always She/Her.
+Zihe was a non-binary ally of us, whose pronouns were always She/Her.
 
 She had ever been in the face of difficulty of life, and had a good time with us.
 
-Owing to her bad family environment and other reasons, her mental health worsened. She started to hurt herself and overdosed, and planned to commit suicide.
+Owing to factors like her bad family environment, her mental health worsened.
+She started to self-harm and overdose, and planned to commit suicide.
 
-She left this world with her partner in Zhongshan, Guangdong on 5th November 2023.
+She left this world with her partner in Zhongshan, Guangdong on November 5th, 2023.