diff --git a/people/hakureico/page.en.md b/people/hakureico/page.en.md index 06fb8bca..41d6c140 100644 --- a/people/hakureico/page.en.md +++ b/people/hakureico/page.en.md @@ -22,17 +22,15 @@ info: ## Description -Hanasaka was a trans girl, who was lively and lovely. -She studied in School of Mathematics, Liaoning Normal University. +Hanasaka was a trans girl who was lively and lovely. +She studied in School of Mathematics at Liaoning Normal University. -She was proficient in mathematics, -and she enjoyed learning computer science. +She was proficient in mathematics and enjoyed learning computer science. She was also a traffic-fan. -She had interests on city bus, rail transit and national railways. -Occasionally, she took a plane and looked at the blue sky outside the porthole. - -Although those were always solo trips. +She was interested in city buses, rail transit and national railways. +Occasionally, she took flights and looked at the blue sky outside the porthole. +Although these were always solo trips. She was good at playing music game OSU, and uploaded many videos of her gameplay. -She was still online even if she was in bad mental condition. +She was still online even she was in a bad mental condition. -Hanasaka was also focus on several kinds of games, +Hanasaka also focused on several kinds of games, such as *THE iDOLM@STER SHINY COLORS* and *Nekopara*. -Sadly, she gradually lost her interest on game under life pressure, -and she no longer updated her activity on games afterwards. +Sadly, she gradually lost interest in games due to life pressure, +and she no longer updated her activities on games afterwards. -Although for some reasons, her mental health got worse since March 2018. Luckily, there were still people who cared about her. -In early June 2018, she went to IKEA with an acquaintance of her, and eat tasty and affordable ice cream corns together. +For some reasons, her mental health got worse since March 2018. Luckily, there were still people who cared about her. +In early June 2018, she went to IKEA with an acquaintance, and eat tasty and affordable ice cream corns together. ## Her Departure -As Hanasaka described herself on Zhihu profile: "Just a Giftia, about to be destroyed". +As Hanasaka described herself on her Zhihu profile: "Just a Giftia, about to be destroyed". A Giftia is a type of android with a humanoid body in anime *PLASTIC MEMORIES*. -They have their own personality and emotion. +They have their own personality and emotions. But they can only "live" for a maximum of 81,920 hours, after which their programming becomes corrupted due to numerous failed attempts at overwriting old information. If a Giftia is not retrieved and deactivated before the end of their lifespan, it is very likely that they will become "Wanderers". Hanasaka used this metaphor to describe her mental state about to collapse. -In May, she use "Mayday" to convey the signal that she was approaching her limit. -Fortunately, she was out of danger late on. +In May, she used "Mayday" to convey the signal that she was approaching her limit. +Fortunately, she was out of danger later on. > Responder 7700 **Mayday Mayday Mayday Mayday** has been downgraded to **Mayday Mayday Mayday** > @@ -75,14 +73,14 @@ Fortunately, she was out of danger late on. > > // My unpredictable mood is just like the weather outside > -> // Please rest assured, everyone who forward my post. It won't crash! +> // Please rest assured, everyone who forwarded my post. It won't crash! Although she told everyone to go out and take a look at the scenery to relax, -and she also said "Please keep alive even if you are desperate. In that case, you can make dreams come true." +and she also said, "Please keep alive even if you are desperate. In that case, you can make dreams come true." But she still chose to leave this world in August. -Before that, she entrusted Mizuki, a railfan in United States to announce her death on her account. +Before that, she entrusted Mizuki, a railfan in United States, to announce her death on her account. Mizuki told us a short story instead of publishing a cold obituary. @@ -92,7 +90,7 @@ Mizuki told us a short story instead of publishing a cold obituary. The sentence was left by her boyfriend to her. She was seeking for the end of her first love, but she cannot receive an answer. -even if the answer is "Go f*ck yourself" +even if the answer was "Go f*ck yourself" Finally, she could only leave such words: @@ -103,11 +101,11 @@ Finally, she could only leave such words: In fact, how could she possibly be a devil going to hell? She was a gentle person with a "helper" personality. She always thought about others without considering herself. -But perhaps it's also the reason why they aparted. +But perhaps it's also the reason why they parted. -At last, she burnt her belongings, and drown in the river that never stopped flowing. +At last, she burnt her belongings, and drowned in the river that never stopped flowing. -She had been in a world where no people would hate her, and no bad things would happen. +She had been in a world where no one would hate her, and no bad things would happen. ## Her Letter @@ -121,15 +119,15 @@ Hanasaka left a letter for her only friend: > > (Maybe hell xDDDD) > -> If you happened to see this, +> If you happen to see this, > > You shouldn't be surprised, > -> Cause neko has 9 lifes =w= +> Cause neko has 9 lives =w= > > Remember, > -> I will be always with you, +> I will always be with you, > > No matter what you've become, > @@ -147,6 +145,6 @@ Hanasaka left a letter for her only friend: > > HOSTED__WITH__GAE____ -Now these accounts are free. May she free too. +Now these accounts are free. May she be free too. Time to sleep friends, and keep smiling, keep alive.