diff --git a/people/Dethelly/page.en.md b/people/Dethelly/page.en.md index f886c1b2..13d28d35 100644 --- a/people/Dethelly/page.en.md +++ b/people/Dethelly/page.en.md @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Therefore, she was certain her parents were too conservative to communicate with ## The dissipated haze in Hangzhou -On 6th January 2024, Sugar met friend A in Hangzhou. +On January 6th, 2024, Sugar met friend A in Hangzhou. Just before meeting A, she hid in the restroom and kept checking the mirror. She was ashamed to meet A because she didn't do her hair or wear cute clothes. @@ -50,7 +50,6 @@ When parting, She asked A on her thoughts of her plan to "threaten" her parents > Sugar: You shouldn't be worried about me. Please forget me as soon as possible. When A left for home, she left Sugar half a bag of oranges, and messaged her "Adios." (Goodbye) on QQ. - A didn't get any reply. That night, Sugar actually deleted her contact. @@ -81,7 +80,7 @@ And she passed away in the early morning of the next day due to chemical poisoni ## After her departure -Later, through a variety of ways, Sugar's mother contacted A on the morning of 23rd January. +Later, through a variety of ways, Sugar's mother contacted A on the morning of January 23rd. After A told her about Sugar's gender dysphoria and the fact of suicide, she was astonished and said: @@ -108,7 +107,7 @@ Her mother had always been grateful to A. ## The new spring -It's 12th, February 2024. The third day of Spring Festival. +It's February 12th, 2024. The third day of Spring Festival. At this night, A set off for a trip to Guiyang and Chongqing.