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 Acheron was a young trans girl who was lovely, brave, and kind-hearted.
 
 She uploaded several Minecraft gameplay videos on Bilibili.
-She once excavated an entire chunk with nine friends from the speedrun community in just 30:17.
+She once excavated an entire chunk in Minecraft with nine friends in the speedrun community in just 30:17.
 
 Acheron was also knowledgeable in technology.
 She uploaded two notable videos:
-one unboxing the BearPi-HM Nano development board,
-and another on installing Klipper based on Debian 10.
+one is unboxing the BearPi-HM Nano development board,
+the other is installing Klipper based on Debian 10.
 
 ## Departure
 
 Acheron battled depression alone,
-never letting it affect others,
-and everyone who knew her was fond of her.
+never letting her depression affect others.
+Everyone who knew her was fond of her.
 
 Despite an unfortunate childhood and a difficult present,
 she didn't complain about her experiences online.
-She always faced life's challenges with optimism and positivity.
+She always faced life's challenges with positivity.
 
 But she left us so early that we cannot even see her retreating figure.
 
-In an instant, we were forever separated, like heaven and earth apart...
+In an instant, we were forever separated, as if heaven and earth...
 
-> [Acheron, the river was really cold and biting... If there is reincarnation in this world, I will protect you until I wake up from my dream...](https://archive.ph/I6EcL)
+> [Acheron, the river was really cold and biting... If there is reincarnation in this world, I will protect you until I wake up from this dream...](https://archive.ph/I6EcL)
 >
 > —— WestmereX