From f3ad40910d257c2e427bc6d193036f566ecbfb3d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aquaticat Date: Thu, 11 Jul 2024 00:30:54 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Update page.en.md MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit 既然明说了是两个，就可以用 one， the other in the ... community 和 from the ... community 这里应该是都可以用，但是我觉得 in 更顺。 ..., and everyone 这句如果把中间部分去掉，就没有联系。分成两句。 不幸的当下应该不可数，但是我也没想到更好的表达方式。 my dream 更常具象。 也不知道我说得对不对，总之都是自己觉得顺所以改了。 --- people/Acheron/page.en.md | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/people/Acheron/page.en.md b/people/Acheron/page.en.md index b8c4fe01..cfc5af05 100644 --- a/people/Acheron/page.en.md +++ b/people/Acheron/page.en.md @@ -10,27 +10,27 @@ info: Acheron was a young trans girl who was lovely, brave, and kind-hearted. She uploaded several Minecraft gameplay videos on Bilibili. -She once excavated an entire chunk with nine friends from the speedrun community in just 30:17. +She once excavated an entire chunk in Minecraft with nine friends in the speedrun community in just 30:17. Acheron was also knowledgeable in technology. She uploaded two notable videos: -one unboxing the BearPi-HM Nano development board, -and another on installing Klipper based on Debian 10. +one is unboxing the BearPi-HM Nano development board, +the other is installing Klipper based on Debian 10. ## Departure Acheron battled depression alone, -never letting it affect others, -and everyone who knew her was fond of her. +never letting her depression affect others. +Everyone who knew her was fond of her. Despite an unfortunate childhood and a difficult present, she didn't complain about her experiences online. -She always faced life's challenges with optimism and positivity. +She always faced life's challenges with positivity. But she left us so early that we cannot even see her retreating figure. -In an instant, we were forever separated, like heaven and earth apart... +In an instant, we were forever separated, as if heaven and earth... -> [Acheron, the river was really cold and biting... If there is reincarnation in this world, I will protect you until I wake up from my dream...](https://archive.ph/I6EcL) +> [Acheron, the river was really cold and biting... If there is reincarnation in this world, I will protect you until I wake up from this dream...](https://archive.ph/I6EcL) > > —— WestmereX